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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am glad to know you are going to hold a summer camp from August 1st to 7th during the vacation.I am interested in your activities.In my opinion,these activities are bound to broaden my horizons.So I write ro you for an application.

Among all the activities you provide,the visiting a world-famous university appeals to me most.Spoken frankly,studying in a world class university is what I intend to do in the near future.And undoubtedly such a visit will hearten me to exert myself more.Hence,I am determined to join in it.

If my application is accepted,please inform me as soon as possible so that I can have sufficient time for the preparation.

Yours,

Li Hua.

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